My brother is a commercial photographer and I had the chance to have him produce a promo video to put on my website. I have a few small changes for him to make but I was wondering if any of you can give me some honest feedback of what you think about it.

thanks

https://vimeo.com/123315961

Nice Bruce. Without making it stand out: before you buy from a standard kitchen shop, check out what you can get custom designed, the quality, the perfect fit! You would be surprised and sure you would enjoy custom.

Very impressive Bruce
i'm going to pass this along to my sister in Norton, she's looking for custom bookcases
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Nice job

Wont pet me play on my verizon iphone6.?????
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I found the music to be to loud for you voice when i was listening, it was hard for me to understand what you were saying. Other than that i think the context was good and the finish product shots are nice but i like before and after shots.

Yes the sound and I'd like to see it sLow down a little at 1:21,,,
That's one classy promo, luv it, best luck Bruce

Bruce, the end of the video has BW Woodworking shouldn't it be BM ?
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Finally worked.
I agree with the music level
And spell check....
Beautiful work
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wow, really nice stuff, nice job. Agree on music, honestly you might not even need it.

Thanks
Yes I know about spelling thanks B&M Woodworking and the town names will be different yep
I mentioned to him about the volume , I agree
I tried to find a more acoustic guitar background but could not , maybe some talented musician could record something for me :D

I am not a good public speaker
I need to speak clearer not like monotone Bill Belichick ;)

All this was off the cuff
If I had more preparation I think it could be a better message
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Very impressive Bruce
i'm going to pass this along to my sister in Norton, she's looking for custom bookcases
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Absolutely
Thank you very much
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Nice Bruce. Without making it stand out: before you buy from a standard kitchen shop, check out what you can get custom designed, the quality, the perfect fit! You would be surprised and sure you would enjoy custom.
And coming from a satisfied customer, you would know Phil :)
Thanks
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Bruce, the speaking part is good, you don't come off as salesy, which is key. And it shows you care about your work. Too polished and it might take away from the feel of it. Really nice stuff by a guy who cares about the work, not all about how much he can charge.
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Thanks
I am not a good public speaker
I need to speak clearer not like monotone Bill Belichick ;)

All this was off the cuff
If I had more preparation I think it could be a better message
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No way! It makes it more real this way. Too professional speaking and its takes away from the realness. People can relate to this. You don't want to be Billy Mays! I think it's great
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What I like about it is, someone meeting you for the first time after watching the video isn't going to say "you're nothing like the guy in the video". That's definitely you!!!

I agree with Skippy, lower the background music should be lowered and slow down the credits at the end.

As my mother would say, "would it kill you to tuck in your shirt" JK

thanks guys
James, that is correct and how I wanted it and who I am

ditto on the music volume| your speaking part excellent
now ...being an art enthusiast ....
i think the picture of the bright green room
should be CUT out of the video completely because it's a distraction
making you "not" focus on your Cabinet work

instead your saying to yourself as you look around
(who in their right mind would paint a living room that color)

this is what it shoulda/coulda looked like (quicky example ok)
http://i25.photobucket.com/albums/c66/ravenob1/slipknotpic.png

with the normal wall color you focus on the carpentry MORE

ps if you'll notice in that picture
the walls and ceiling are reflecting green shadows onto the white cabinet color
making them look not as beautiful as they actually are
where as a light blue would compliment the white finish

Nice work!
PS Love the green

Nice work!
PS Love the greenpaint

The walls are not as vivid as it shows in a picture, kind of like when you take a picture of the sunrise, in real life it is not as vivid or red as it shows up on the photo. If you saw the room in person you would agree the color looks great in this home.

Others have said something about it being a distraction but honestly, the shot is not there that long of a time period.

Very Nice!
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