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new website
Can you load and tell me if you can see any mistakes or how the pictures load on your computer Ive worked on this all weekend I appricate your feedback www.msmexec.com
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Looks good, by cut and pasting the text into a word doc I found a couple of misspelled words and one grammer.
Homepage misspelled words - professional and accommodate About Us grammer error - "Whether it be the most elegant of weddings, ..... " it should say "Whether it is the most elegant of weddings, ...." Tours - I'm not to sure about this, but where you say " ...immigrants, presidents, Pequots and politicians. " is Pequot already plural or is it Peguot's. Thats all I found, Good Luck Mike - I envy anyone who works for themselves it takes alot of kehones. |
Do you really get to cart around that many babes ? :D
-spence |
Thank you
I fixed those words its good for someone else to look at it and give me feedback because I have stared at that for hours and would not have seen that the only thing i want to do now is add more to the reservation page I want a lot more boxes for info but I cant figure how to Put the boxes in. something like this one
http://www.qlslimousine.com/reservations/ IVE got it figured out how to install the box but it ask you to put a value on them and thats where i get lost it will not email the rest of the info where I put boxes in. |
Excellent pictures, MrMacey. I really liked the quality on that, and the Boston skyline, very nice!
This is a very clean site, looks professional too. |
The mouseover links should be jpg's instead of gif's because of the fact that gif's are very "lossy" (as in they look like crap when resized)
Also there's rumors that the Underwater Warfare School is going to resume tours of the campus and museam soon again. Groton isn't the only sub museam. :) "Limousine-Boston,Providence,Raynham,Taunton,MA,RI... " at the top of the page should technically be the company name, so you ingrain it in the viewers mind. Then below it put "Limousines/transportation/wth ever serving Boston, Providence, etc. etc. etc." Also stick the 800# somewhere where its ALWAYS visible on ANY page. You want business. |
I have to concur with Likwid, who probably has majored in Marketing. :)
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That Limousine boston Providence etc!!
Is for search engine optimazation nobody will punch in MSM EXEC but they will punch in Boston Limousine try it on Google Im number five if you punch in the right key words.
on google punch in Limousine Boston |
for your drop down menus heres the html for it.. all you gotta do is replace the URL's
<center><br> <form name="jump"> <select name="menu"> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/musicproject.html">Home Page</option> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/lzlyrics.html">Lyrics</option> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/members.html">Members</option> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/gallery.html">Photo Gallery</option> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/discography.html">Discography</option> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/presence.html">Presence The Album</option> <option value="http://www.geocities.com/katie_in_us2001/history-origin.html">History/Origin of Led Zeppelin</option> </select> <input type="button" onClick="location=document.jump.menu.options[document.jump.menu.selectedIndex].value;" value="GO"> </form> <br> |
just in case it has the go button also.. if you need the other way around whre you just choose an option i iwll get that for you.. i still have the reservation page i made for you about a year ago with the logo.. if you want it..
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How you come up in search engines is determined by meta tags
stick up in the top of the code (just below <html> PHP Code:
And put it on EVERY page on the site. Or just look at the source for the front page of www.striped-bass.com |
under Mozilla Firefox a lot of images seem stretched.
specificly the party pics and the tours pics. You might want to pull them into an image application and resize them there rather then letting the web page do it. |
you could also force them to be sized appropriately with the <img="" sze=""> or something like that, i'll have to look, i forget.
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I changed things around
hows that look
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OK, I'll say what everyone is thinking, but nobody will say.
I think you should be able to click on the pictures in the testimonials so I can get a better view of the hotties. Lord help me, I am sick. _Z_ |
it'd help in the meta tags to spell Massachusetts correctly. :D
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Hey where do you see Massachusetts
Me and brian are getting together Sunday at my office to look at this if you would like to come over Im right on 44 Raynham Ill take both of you out for Lunch after.
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are u writting ur own code on this? if not then you could just do a script search for the extra buttons on the reservations page and simply edit it to hold content appropriate to ur business =]
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Re: Hey where do you see Massachusetts
Quote:
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Sent you some PMs
I have done website critiques in the past and put down some items for you. I slipped into the nitpicker that that job entails so take some of it with a grain of salt :) |
Jugstah
if you want to take a ride up and help Im buying Lunch at the Chinese Buffet down here Id appriciate the help.
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Meta name="Keywords" content="Boston Limousine,Limousine transportation service,Boston,Limousine transportation service,Boston Limousine transportation service, Boston Limousines,MA Limousines,Masschusettes,Masschusettes transportation service,Providence Rhode Island limousines,QLS,In">
Heres the Mass mis-spell........ |
putting common mispellings in there can sometimes be a good thing and make a difference.
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you're right but do you think it was intentional......
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google actually corrects spelling now.
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