Mike,
Two flaws,
a. The site is wicked professional with the exception of the picture up top. Or at least not have the picture as your lead pic. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice pic. It's just that the picture shows a human characteristic approach, which offsets the corporate image of your site. I would trade the picture in for more pics of the luxury aspects of your limousines, and put the picture of the driver at the bottom. The fist picture of a web page is the focal point of a web site. That’s the one thing they will look at first. Try a pic showing off luxury with a hint of mystique.
b. Your site has an imbalance. You seem to have an awesome well-kept vehicle(s), which is a huge strong point. Showing off the vehicles is a must. Your other strong point is that you offer great service at a great rate. More pics of the condition and luxury of your vehicles are needed to help balance it out. You don’t want to give an impression that you are just a budget service.
Overall background of the page gives a sense of professionalism and applies to their self-sense of importance. This makes it even more important to add pics stressing the luxury aspect of your limousine, especially the interior.
PS: if you had rod holders on top of your limo I would agree with Big Bo. But you don’t, you are just asking for help.
Take Care, good luck.
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