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Old 10-11-2004, 09:55 AM   #2
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Looks good, by cut and pasting the text into a word doc I found a couple of misspelled words and one grammer.

Homepage misspelled words - professional and accommodate

About Us grammer error - "Whether it be the most elegant of weddings, ..... "

it should say

"Whether it is the most elegant of weddings, ...."

Tours - I'm not to sure about this, but where you say " ...immigrants, presidents, Pequots and politicians. "

is Pequot already plural or is it Peguot's.

Thats all I found, Good Luck Mike - I envy anyone who works for themselves it takes alot of kehones.
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