I don't want to sound rude but I can't read your posts / novellas because they can be soooooo long. Seriously trying to be diplomatic here - please shorten them up some, a little, or give us the somewhat condensed version now and I promise I'll add a section on the new site where you put the long story in...
Don't get me wrong, I encourage a good & if necessary, good & long story but I feel like I need to schedule a time slice when you start one of these. Again, ZERO disprespect intended whatsoever, just that a more condensed version - pleeeze
Sometimes it just seemd like you are trying out for Offshore Magazine...