He is definitely talented...
My critique? It does look like it's waiting for an overlay though, and that's why
I wouldn't want it on a shirt. Too much empty space and straight lines, but hold your tongue Mike...I do understand why.
In my perfect world, I would like to see the water-top a bit more active, (a few white caps)...tough to make her shoulders any wider at that angle, and the girth can get lost in the color of the ocean bottom but I would extend it downward a wee bit, and yes....pull a little back on the lips, not the thickness, but the length...I'd also place a few large boulders back on shore...The coloring is pretty, and I LOVE the EYE!!
O.K....I'll shove my pencil back up my
now.