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01-14-2004, 07:38 PM
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Fishing Chauffeur
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: raynham mass
Posts: 2,227
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I was wondering
if you could check out my website just for colors and mistakes let me know if you would change anything Im allways fiddling around with it Im trying to target corporate what do you think!!
www.msmexec.com
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01-14-2004, 10:26 PM
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I'm not from here
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Putnam,CT
Posts: 102
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Nice site, Good Luck with it.
You might want to concider getting a toll free phone number. It doesn't cost alot, but is really almost expected now adays in business.
Pete
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01-16-2004, 09:54 AM
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DDG-51
Join Date: Mar 2002
Posts: 3,550
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Looks good and congrats on running your biz!!
at the bottom of the front page under the pic of the suburban you have "For rates and info" , can you make that a link that so it can be clicked and send the customer to the rates page.
good luck .
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01-17-2004, 09:48 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Aug 2002
Location: RockVegas
Posts: 3,228
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Not trying to stir things up or start anything negative, but isn't this the same as Spam that we tend to frown upon on this site?
Mrmacey, I sincerely wish you well in your business ventures. This just seemed the same to me as someone else posting sales or services with links to their websites.

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The future ain't what it used to be. --Yogi Berra
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01-18-2004, 06:12 AM
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Fishing Chauffeur
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: raynham mass
Posts: 2,227
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bigbo
my company has been advertised under my name on this site since april when i started the limo I think everyone knows what I do I have donated to this site Im not a lurker who comes in with 2 post and trys to spam or sell things I just needed some opinions about my site what better place to ask than in the computer section of a fishing site with about two hundred of these guys I have met and another 20 or so that have been out with me on the boat and I feel I am a sponser of this site when I can I am involved with all the parties, raffles, and tournments the best I can and there is a difference between a one time poster and a member that participates on this site if john thinks Im here to spam ill take this down no hard feelings I just think there is a difference between spam and asking for help.
Last edited by mrmacey; 01-18-2004 at 06:21 AM..
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01-19-2004, 08:27 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2002
Posts: 22,805
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sent e-mail
let me know you recieved it . thanks, Rav
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01-19-2004, 09:54 AM
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Fishing Chauffeur
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: raynham mass
Posts: 2,227
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I did thank you
I just have to figure out how to put a link within text its really hard to do because you can only do so much in one box
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01-19-2004, 10:33 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2002
Posts: 22,805
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attaching link
called a hyper text link i believe you'll generally find it or access the tool .... under ... TOOLS .up top Although i dont know what software your using.... create hypertext link then point where.... search the top in options or right click everythin to death *grin you should see it....
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01-22-2004, 11:01 PM
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Registered User
Join Date: Jun 2002
Location: Needham MA
Posts: 303
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Nice site Mike....
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01-25-2004, 12:38 AM
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Registered User
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Tiverton
Posts: 34
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Mike,
Two flaws,
a. The site is wicked professional with the exception of the picture up top. Or at least not have the picture as your lead pic. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice pic. It's just that the picture shows a human characteristic approach, which offsets the corporate image of your site. I would trade the picture in for more pics of the luxury aspects of your limousines, and put the picture of the driver at the bottom. The fist picture of a web page is the focal point of a web site. That’s the one thing they will look at first. Try a pic showing off luxury with a hint of mystique.
b. Your site has an imbalance. You seem to have an awesome well-kept vehicle(s), which is a huge strong point. Showing off the vehicles is a must. Your other strong point is that you offer great service at a great rate. More pics of the condition and luxury of your vehicles are needed to help balance it out. You don’t want to give an impression that you are just a budget service.
Overall background of the page gives a sense of professionalism and applies to their self-sense of importance. This makes it even more important to add pics stressing the luxury aspect of your limousine, especially the interior.
PS: if you had rod holders on top of your limo I would agree with Big Bo. But you don’t, you are just asking for help.
Take Care, good luck.
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