Looks like you are off to a great start. Shape looks You probably want to switch the weight and hook locations. Hook should be up front cause that is where the striper will hit it. The weight on a danny is best in the center of the plug. Gives it that nice snake like action. Up closer to the nose will give it more of a wobble and much more roll. Course, you might test it out like you have it and find that is the action you are after. Ahh, the fun of experimenting
You probably want to switch the weight and hook locations. Hook should be up front cause that is where the striper will hit it. The weight on a danny is best in the center of the plug. Gives it that nice snake like action. Up closer to the nose will give it more of a wobble and much more roll. Course, you might test it out like you have it and find that is the action you are after. Ahh, the fun of experimenting 
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